05.06.09
A stupid poem
I hate writing or reading poems, because the only ones that actually sound like poems have rhymes force-fitted in that end up sounding awkward at the end of the lines. And the ones that don’t sound like poems sound like randomly disjointed sentences strung together in a semblance of a theme.
Tried writing a prose once for a guy who probably had no idea how long it took to write it and probably wouldn’t have appreciated it more anyway.
In the spirit of the whole emo phase I seem to be going through, I think it warrants some emo poem. It would only be fitting. In fact, it’s practically required in these circumstances.
Why…
Does it feel like the pit of doom
How…
Have I sunk into such gloom
Who…
Gives a shit about me
What…
Is the meaning of this misery
Perhaps the answer is within
Where puppies roam and angels sing
Hahahaha… that was really lame.
anonymousteenager said,
May 10, 2009 at 7:23 pm
Yeah it’s the same with the stuff I write – it either sounds forced or just prose fitted into a poetic structure.
A coincidence I just noticed was that I have just written a poem about a pit I’ve fallen into – metaphorical of course – that I’ve scheduled for tomorrow.
nieves said,
May 21, 2009 at 4:37 pm
Lol..I actually like it..can be a cool emo rock song
puregreenjade said,
May 21, 2009 at 6:38 pm
…dot dot dot
When you get your piano you can put some music to it lol